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For my students – not everything I've learned. Just most of it.

Maybe there's some realm
where you're tougher than everyone
and all recognize, scatter.

More than likely people plot.
The many cut down the one -
a red sun falls and reigns.

"Wrong us, shall we not revenge?"
Over the wails of the sick and dying,
the silence of the imprisoned,

I hear you. I think about her.
How her portly cat rolled,
how she flooded her garden,

how she sacrificed for even the deserving.
I know the final test is not what you do,
but who you are. Why that last moment matters.

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I don't always write well. In fact, I write pretty badly.

I'll let you judge the importance of what I say. Tread carefully.

On Plato's Minos

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:iconichigoneko1997:
This can be taken in so many different ways :) It flows beautifully and you have such skill! Can't wait to see more :D
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You did justice on Justice. no wait......
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Mood: Joy *akarra May 26, 2012  Student Writer
Haha. Thank you so much for the compliment and all the support you give. I really do think there's a lot going on in this poem, and I'm happy for that.

"Birdlike" is still my personal favorite though. Just hope it gets the girl...
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~Honor2Serve May 25, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
I do like this :)
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Mood: Love *akarra May 25, 2012  Student Writer
I was just about to ask how you were doing. Thank you so much for reading, but how was your day, how are you?
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~Honor2Serve May 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sorry it took so long to get to it :oops:

I'm doing pretty good :) Still job hunting, but had a busy work week at my part time job. Balanced out nicely :nod:

How about you? Hows the publication going?
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Mood: Joy *akarra May 26, 2012  Student Writer
Been lazy with dissertation stuff. Am reading Plato's "Theaetetus," which is one of those "maybe this will get done in 50 years" projects. Writing a lot on haiku privately. I must have 2 or 3 commentaries unpublished right now, and a few more I won't post anytime soon.
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~Honor2Serve May 26, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Sounds like a lot of fun, actually :) At least it's something you like.
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Mood: Wow! ~pikalatias46 May 24, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I really liked this!!!!!! It's one of those pieces that could be taken many different ways. But you always amaze me with your writing skills!!!! :love:
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Mood: Joy *akarra May 24, 2012  Student Writer
It's been a while - how are you doing?

Thank you so much for the support! I think "Birdlike" is my best poem in recent days, but I like this one too.
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