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Like a mosquito,
her eyes spoke hunger, leaving
only freezing blood.
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For #poetry-book's prompt: [link]

Also, a few of you have been asking me how exactly I go about saying things about poetry. An introduction to how I read: Shakespeare, Sonnet 73 & New Criticism
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well done, I was never good at haikus, so I'm kinda jealous of yours...
(Random fact of the day: only female mosquitos drink blood.)
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*CyphersignaL May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Interesting way of portraying this person, as well as the reaction to their prominent desire. Some wear what they want on their sleeve, but in this case it's right there in their eyes
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*DramiraDarkthorn May 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ohhh, I like it. Great atmosphere. I think you've managed to capture just the right emotion and gave it a wonderful visual effect.
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:iconchoirgirl888:
That is an amazing haiku, I'm really really jealous! I think it's amazing that only a few lines can be so powerful and moving, I think this is one of the most amazing haiku's I have ever read. Immediate favourite.
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:iconichigoneko1997:
Haiku's are truly beautiful and even though there is few words, the depth of the meaning is astounding. This is going into my favourites :)
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~Honor2Serve May 7, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Wow very concise! I like!
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!KyeWriting May 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, this is just wonderful! It's a perfect example of poetry where a few words say so much without using a bunch of words. That's what I love about haikus, they have so much potential and you've used it all in Eyes. Wonderful, goes straight to my favs!
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Mood: Love ~Merikuu May 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very chilling! I like how simple, yet intense it is.
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~Manigran May 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Simple but amazing. Love the way you incorporate the mosquito here.
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~purplemadness501 May 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
iLyyk thiz 1 :D
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