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Like a high kite -
almost above the wind.
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Want to try some minimalist exercises. Inspired by Alda Merini.
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~LauraChan3 Aug 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the contrast between the "high" kite and the word "almost"...it makes me expand with my mind.
But honestly...I'm not sure if i understand it. I think I have some problems with minimalist poems, even though i find them lovely
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It says a lot, but I can't explain how :) Good job as always :D
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Mood: Love ~kartiksharma Jun 25, 2012  Student General Artist
AMazing Job!♥
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~purplemadness501 Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...iHav thought 0f it dat wayy :meow:
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!KyeWriting Jun 23, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I like it. Minimalism suits you!
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I like the way this little poem seems to pivot on the word "almost". The echo of "high as a kite" adds another layer of resonance. Very neatly done!
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~Drydell-da-Vinci Jun 22, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
I don't know if I get this one.... :iconiseewhatudidthereplz:
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~ohio-writer Jun 22, 2012  Student Writer
For me this strike as almost and ironic sort of situation that is lovely as well. In that, this artistic use of brevity to express a topic around the concept of hyperbole. It sounds a bit crazy, but that is what I find truly fascinating about this.
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